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The Sound Of Your Name
https://soundcloud.com/joeaikenmusic/the-sound-of-your-name
Coming Home
https://soundcloud.com/joeaikenmusic/coming-home
I Just Want To Know You
https://soundcloud.com/joeaikenmusic/i-just-want-to-know-you-live
We Are One
https://soundcloud.com/joeaikenmusic/we-are-one-by-joe-aiken
Incredible Rescue
http://www.reverbnation.com/joeaiken/song/19322020-incredible-rescu...
I like the idea here, there are a lot of times when I've got a few new songs I'm working on and I wish I had some feedback on what might be the "best" of the group... anyway, here's my list, favorite to least fave.
COMING HOME was my favorite; it would wind up sounding like more of a country song with our band, but I think it would work that way. There are a couple words I'd tweak (with your permission, I'm sorta picturing this as a telling of the prodigal son story, so I feel like the line about "I run to you" should be a little more hesitant...)... I think we'd try to do this a little faster than you're doing it - half time the instrumental part and then pick the whole thing up. I JUST WANT TO KNOW YOU I also liked, although there's a "we" in there that seemed a little out of place; we're kinda overloaded with slow songs right now, too. I do think the (4x) repetition of the title for a chorus works well here. WE ARE ONE would be my third choice, again, just a couple lyrical things that put me off a little... there's a reference to "you" but the song doesn't really have a "you" character, I think it would flow better if it was more like, "we will stand together." At the end of the verse, "Let us be the church, die to start" I don't know what that means, maybe I'm hearing it wrong?
INCREDIBLE RESCUE, the title put me off a little bit before I even listened, and the song lyric itself seemed like it mixed up references to Jesus between "you" and "he" and that's a pet peeve for me. The music feels a bit repetitive, as well. THE SOUND OF YOUR NAME was my least favorite, but that's because I'm just not very fond of "let's go out and evangelize this nation" songs, something about that whole "this nation" thing that I tend to shy away from. Also, the first "verse" section seemed like it went a little bit off topic.
It wasn't part of the contest, but I'll also mention that there's a version of "Be Thou My Vision" which does make me kinda crazy... I really dislike it when somebody takes an old hymn and tries to hot rod it by double timing the instrumental part and then the whole song, the melody, ends up slower than it would be as a hymn.
Hey Charles,
Thank you for your reply.
Coming Home- Feel free to tweak, country song sounds good!
We Are One- it is "Let us be the church He died to start"
Incredible Rescue
The Sound Of Your Name
We Are One
I Just Want To Know You
Coming Home
Well, I don't know anyone else's take, but my own preference is for worship songs that are directly about who God is and what He has done (IR), then songs that have a corporate response to who God is and what God has done (TSOYN, WAO); and I have less of a preference for corporate worship songs that are about me and my own personal response to God (IJWTKY, CH).
But that's just my take.
Great thread idea, by the way. Hopefully we are all trying to get better at what we do...
Burning Eyes
https://ginahyatt.bandcamp.com/track/your-burning-eyes
Things Aren't What They Seem
https://soundcloud.com/ginahyatt/things-arent-what-they-seem
Did You Marry For Love
http://www.reverbnation.com/ginahyatt/song/21847058-did-you-marry-f...
Thanks for listening to my songs!
thanks for listening! :)
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