Hi Jantia, thanks for sharing the song. I think it has some good potential. Your vocals are good and very appealing to listen to. I notice just a couple of spots where the words seem rushed, so you just might work on phrasing or even changing the wording slightly so that you can say the say thing with less words.
If you're going to put this on a cd, then I'd spend some time on the engineering and instrumentation. The guitar part is fine for demonstrating or in a small setting, but finding some good musicians to create an arrangement to go with your great singing would really boost the song. Again, some great potential here!
I was trying to get it done for my daughter's birthday yesterday, so I tried to keep it as simple as possible. I would love to see some other instrumentation to "fill it up", and I will be doing that soon. It was an editing process while we recorded. :)
I have a lot of praise and worship songs that I have written, as well. This one just got recorded quickly for my daughter's birthday. I will upload some of the others when I get the vocals done at the studio. I am glad you liked it. :)