"My take on the second verse is to maybe change it from eliminating the first two lines and going straight to that part as a pre-chorus after the first verse. There needs to be some work on the chords for the sake of keeping everything from sounding…"
"Welcome to WtR... I'm afraid you'll find this is not a real active site - some of my comments on other songs that you responded to were written in 2015... but in the spirit of "original songs are not easy to write..." here are…"
Original Songs are not easy to write please give me your input This song is called ( Forever you Are..)Verse 1inside the throne room the heartbeat of Godis the atmosphere of heaven that will change your heartAnd you know that you will never be the same if you let Him in.And His waiting just for you to open up that doorAnd His waiting to Bless you and give you so much moreIf you only let him come inside He'll change your lifeChorusForever He is Jesus ChristForever He has paid the priceForever i…See More
Justin Hurling was born in Cape Town, South Africa.!
I’m a husband and father, musician, songwriter, producer, Pastor with Doctorate in Sacred Music from Trinity International Bible University.
I’m married to my beautiful wife Kim and have two daughters, Keasten 18 and Jessica 14.
My spirit filled journey with God, has led me to a place of intimacy and deep fellowship with the Holy Spirit. Now as the Worship Pastor of Lighthouse Assembly of God in Queens, New York,
Integrity, New Breed,Chris tomlin,elevation, bethel,Hymns and old Choruses
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